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Online
Peer Review of Thesis
Post
Thesis Statement:
Post topic and thesis statement by Thursday,
February 27 at 5:00 p.m. on the LearnOnline Group discussion board for
peer review
Peer
Review:
Edit thesis statements for two teammates, using the praise,
questions, polish approach, by Tuesday,
March 4 at 5:00 p.m.
*Note:
That's a total of three (3) postings to the group discussion board for online
peer review of thesis statements.
| Current
Forum: Peer Review |
| Date:
Thu Feb 27 2003 5:57 pm |
| Author:
Gress, Kimberley <kgress1@towson.edu> |
| Subject:
Kim's Thesis |
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| The purpose of this
study is to investigate the effect of smaller class size on the
learner. |
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| Current
Forum: Peer Review |
| Date:
Fri Feb 28 2003 6:14 pm |
| Author:
O'Brien, Kelly <angel7152002@yahoo.com> |
| Subject:
Re: Kim's Thesis |
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Your thesis seems to
have a great point only it is very broad. Maybe there is a way
to expand it some or explain more on what you are focusing on.
It just seems very short.
~*~Kelly~*~ |
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| Current
Forum: Peer Review |
| Date:
Mon Mar 3 2003 8:35 pm |
| Author:
Gress, Kimberley <kgress1@towson.edu> |
| Subject:
Re: Liz's Thesis Statement. |
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| I think that you have
great information in your paragraph. Also you used a personal
experience which helped explain your topic well. I just think
that it doesn't really sound like a thesis but more like a
supporting paragraph. My only suggestion would be to narrow down
the information you had in your paragraph to form another
thesis. |
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| Current
Forum: Peer Review |
| Date:
Mon Mar 3 2003 8:51 pm |
| Author:
Gress, Kimberley <kgress1@towson.edu> |
| Subject:
Re: Kelly's Thesis |
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| I think that your
thesis is very well written. Also it gave me a good idea of what
your paper is going to be about. Maybe you could give an example
of the differences you are referring to but besides that I think
its great. |
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