Danielle's Online Portfolio

 Abstract of Research paper |Research Journal| Home| http://tiger.towson.edu/~dcox2/research/workingwithsources.htm| Media Literacy| Thesis Statement| future information| Ethics Response| Web Evaluation| History| Technology Standards| Research Paper

Directions: Provide one paragraph from your technology paper, then respond to two peers in your class

 
Current Forum: Peer Review: One Paragraph of Rough Draft
Date: Mon Apr 19 2004 11:28 pm
Author: Scott, Danielle <star_28@blackplanet.com>
Subject: Re: Stephanie's paragraph
Modify Forum

The use of words are good and the paragraph was very informing about what you were talking about. It is seems that you will be comparing and constrasting.
Post response

 
Current Forum: Peer Review: One Paragraph of Rough Draft
Date: Mon Apr 19 2004 11:31 pm
Author: Scott, Danielle <star_28@blackplanet.com>
Subject: Re: Colleen's Paragraph :)
Modify Forum

Overall paragraph was good but there was a typo in the paragraph were you reapeat yourself, you should try and change that, because it doesn't flow well eith the paragragh.
Post response

 

Back to previous screen

 

Last updated March 18, 2004

Send comments to star_28@blackplanet.com